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Ponified by Rainy-bleu Ponified by Rainy-bleu
Some people said that I needed to draw moar ponies.
SO HERE YA GO. ouo

Played around with the background on this one, this time I tried to make semi-realistic sun rays. I think they look weird... meh >:I
If anyone has any tips on improving with the sun rays of the clouds or any of that sort of thing, please tell me! I'd love to hear it ^^
But for now, enjoy Rainy as a pony.

MLP:FiM (c) *fyre-flye
Rainy (c) Me
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:iconlightstudioz:
Alright! This looks really great, but since you asked for background tips, I'll tell you what I can~

First off, the backgrounds look totally fine. However, that's if this were for chibi purposes only. If you wanted more of a realistic background, here's what I suggest~
I'm not sure if you use Sai or Photoshop, but if you lower the opacity settings on your brush, (to like, 20% ish) and brush multiple stokes in circular motions to build up a realistic work. Also, try to add more color to your clouds by putting some grey, orange, or purple when blending with your white stokes. It gives the clouds more depth c;
Oh, and you might want to consider using your gradient tool to add more depth to your sky~

Okay, for the sun rays, turn your opacity down, and use a softer brush to do some long strokes across your pony. (I would recommend using a light yellow or blend it with white/orange to give it more of a sunny effect)

Alrighty, that's it xD I really like this picture Rainy, you did an awesome job on it ;D
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Hi Rainy! ouo
First critique, sorry if it's bad!

Positives: I love the colors of this picture and the smooth lineart. The legs, the hair, and the cutie mark are also very well done!
Negatives: Proportions. The body looks a little too long for a female pony, and the wings are in a strange position, leaving no room for them to close, really. Next time make the wings more fanned out and above her body more!
I would also like to see you try shading according to light source. It would look more realistic as if she really is flying.
Okay, hope you take all of this into consideration! c:
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HomestuckCatLuver12 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pls no ponies. No.......
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:iconcatsnip:
catsnip Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
moar ouo
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ShowTimePony12 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Female Brony?
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TheDappledDragon Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Student General Artist
no.
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asnm28 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dis cool.
Only thing is.
That the dark bleu mane doesnt fit dat much...
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ChillyBilly4 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student Artist
NOSTRILS 
WHEREFOR ART THOU
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:iconxxtechieruffinxx:
xXtechieruffinxX Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL
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:iconsoul-skaterz:
Soul-Skaterz Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PERTY
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Patchworks-Key Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poniefyed rainy, dats hawt :I lolz
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ShellstormTehKitteh Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I'd probably be an alicorn if I was a pony. princess shellstorm! XD
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RainbowStorms359 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
OMG HOW BEAUTIFUL!
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foreverv103 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PONY POWER!!!!! :iconpinkiepielaplz:
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Rainy-bleu Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHOOP
:icontwilightlaplz::iconapplejacklaplz::iconfluttershylaplz:
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StarTheFluffeh Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AGH IT WONT LET ME WRITE A CRITIQUE MY DA IS ACTING UP ASDFGHJK ;___;
BUT IN SHORT WORDS.
THIS IS SO AMAZING
I LOVE THE CUTIE MARK AND EVERYTHING
ASDFGHJKL; IM OBSESSED
HER POSE
ASDFGJKHJGFDSAHMJN
THIS
IS
LEGENDARYYY
ouo
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Rainy-bleu Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much!!! :iconiloveyouplz:
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IMAGlNATION Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
yay
we should draw our ponified selves together
and i love the pose you drew, just looovvveee iiittt aaah :3
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Rainy-bleu Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah, that would be awesome! >:3
oh, and thanks! ^^ I'm pretty pleased with how it turned out ;u;
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LPStrinity Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You did great on this! Maybe you could have used softer colors on the rays... But what do I know? XD
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WonderSparks Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice work! :la:
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catsnip Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
I love this! You modified her didn't you, I remember you showing this to me on iScribble (in like late 2012) cx
She looks awesome! I don't like my ponysona...IT'S HORIBLE AAAAAAAAH ;A;
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Rainy-bleu Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really? Thank you so much! ;w;
All I did was copypaste Rainy's design onto a pony and altered it a little, haha XD
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:iconcatsnip:
catsnip Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Oh yes, I can see that! xD
Oh and I need your help with something ;w;
Read muh journal entry aaaaaaaah xc
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:iconrainy-bleu:
Rainy-bleu Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just did ;n;
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carolLPS Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Artist
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Alright!
Nice cutie mark and details!
I love the colors if only you worked on the mane a little more.
The sun effects are a little too bright but I adore them.
Your hoofs are great and the wings could stand out more.
The face is good!
Maybe you could be a alicorn ouo
Cute and nice though
oh and hai ovo
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it didn't let me do critique ono
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Outer--Science Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
I really don't have too much time to write a critique... but a little tip is to make sure that you know the exact point where your shading should go. Besides the streaks of light, I cannot tell where the light source is coming from.

This is really cute. Nice job. ^w^
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YingerySharpclaws Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
so kawaii~ ovo
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paigelol123 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Filmographer
XD her cutie mark is kinda funny to me
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RayvenLPS Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PONEH PONEH PONEH
YOUE MY PONEH
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flawfox Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
awesome
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TCIG123 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ERMAHGERD. FLUFFEH PONEH WITH A SCARF.
The cutie mark is so..Well..cute! X3
I love how the little stripes in her mane are really vague, but they're still visible
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Rainy-bleu Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, thank you so much! ^^
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TCIG123 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem! owo
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PrincessAstro Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you look awesome :3
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BeriAndKaiden Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Fly, Rainey, fly! XD
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